The article I chose talks about a ship that was sunk due to a giant jellyfish attack. I think that the article is somewhat messy because it goes from one thing to another. From my point of view the author should have stuck to an organize pattern because if he did the essay would have sounded more formal. To me it sounded like if the author had no idea what he was writing about because his article was based of another article and it did not provide ore information about the ship that sunk. I read two different articles one was supposed to be the original and the other was based off the original one. The second article was ore like a summary and the writer was still all over the place with the details of the story. Seeing that both writers were all over the place made me think that they did it on a rush.
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